Wednesday 11 January 2012

SIXTEENTH ENTRY - Boxing Day Rewrite

The Unattended Lessons has recently been undergoing changes.

On Boxing Day, during a morning walk, I rewrote the script.

I made changes to the protagonist's profession, clarified certain important aspects of his relationship with Isolde, and gave the film a rather different feel.

I had been working on these changes for a few weeks, but the day after Christmas things fell into place.

I believe it has been simplified and strengthened.

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